Tuesday, December 06, 2005

Modern Talking III

Your hands are so sweet

Fingers extending a segment more than they should
Long, gentle, feeling every crevice of my ears
Soaping me down
Like a mother bathing her favourite son
Sweet smelling hamam

And then you caress my face
With those bony fingers of yours
Tracing the jaw line, running through my hair
Under my eyes
Down the knob of my neck to my spine

Holding me close, like a child

6 Comments:

At December 07, 2005 10:41 PM , Blogger yesbob said...

for a moment,I thought this was the band ..

 
At December 08, 2005 12:37 PM , Blogger ubergeek said...

Loved it except for the "hamam" bit. Thought that felt like a jagged nail on that guy's hand ;-)

ubergeek, the

 
At December 08, 2005 9:02 PM , Blogger cactusjump said...

bob: the band?

uber: that's my fave part ;)

 
At December 09, 2005 2:59 PM , Blogger ubergeek said...

CJ: For once we disagree ;-) Maybe if you read it out to me I might end up liking it, but when I read it out, it doesn't come out sounding right. Or is that the point?

 
At December 09, 2005 10:25 PM , Blogger yesbob said...

yep. that was a :P btw

 
At December 16, 2005 10:32 AM , Blogger First Rain said...

When everything retro is modern again,
Is it merely us?
Or is it History's penchant,
For repeating herself.

 

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